AWAKEN AT
DAWN
by
John
Watkins
FADE IN:
INT. DAY. HOSPITAL RECOVERY ROOM
The scene begins by a first person perspective of MAIN
PROTAGONIST opening his eyes, an edit being used to recreate the ‘eye opening’
effect. Revealed would be a blurred hospital room, with only generic hospital
sounds playing at a barely audible volume in the background being heard. The
scene would play out for a few small seconds, before the MAIN PROTAGONIST ‘closes
his eyes’.
FADE OUT.
FADE IN:
INT. DAY. HOSPITAL RECOVERY ROOM
The MAIN CHARACTER would, similar to the last scene, open his
eyes again, revealing a hospital room significantly less blurred and more
audible than the last scene. In the frame would be the DOCTOR dressed in white
clothing slightly blurred out, speaking to the main character with a slightly
echoing voice.
DOCTOR
(Empathetic)
I’m sorry,
but you’ve been in an accident.
I’m afraid
you’ve been in a coma for… nine years.
The main character would then proceed to close his eyes again.
FADE OUT.
JUMP CUT IN:
EXT. DAY. BAY CLUB
The MAIN CHARACTER would be dressed in formal attire, and would
also have bandage securely wrapped around his face to disguise his entire face,
not allowing the audience to see even any of it. He would be standing in a
lonely looking field, looking away from the camera silent and thoughtfully
looking out towards the outer shot. Music would begin to play overhead, the
music mysterious and in sync with the clip.
JUMP CUT OUT.
JUMP CUT IN:
EXT. NIGHT. DARK STREET
The MAIN CHARACTER would be standing in the middle of a dark
street alone again, looking away from the camera similar to the last scene. The
music would continue to play.
JUMP CUT OUT.
JUMP CUT IN:
INT. DAY. BATHROOM
The MAIN CHARACTER would be looking away from the camera towards
a mirror, looking towards his own reflection. The camera would be angled in a
way so the MAIN CHARACTER’s front would be reflected and revealed to the
audience. Music would continue overhead, whilst the main character is
completely silent. The camera would slowly pan to the right.
JUMP CUT OUT.
JUMP CUT IN:
EXT. NIGHT. DARK STREET
The MAIN CHARCTER would be running throughout the street, the
camera tracking the camera running through the street loosely. The heartbeat
sound that continuously played would get more noticeable, getting faster
alongside the music.
JUMP CUT OUT.
JUMP CUT IN:
EXT. NIGHT. FOREST
The MAIN CHARACTER would be frantically running through the
forest, the camera frantically looking around the forest whilst the main
character runs through it.
JUMP CUT OUT.
INT. DAY. HOSPITAL ROOM
The MAIN CHARACTER would be in the familiar hospital room from
the beginning, and would see a piece of paper that would say ‘Find me’ with THE
WOMAN narrating overhead.
THE WOMAN
Find me.
FADE OUT.
JUMP CUT IN:
EXT. NIGHT. DARK STREET
Camera is a close up tracking shot of MAIN CHARACTER’S legs
whilst he’s running, the heartbeat sound increasing in pace dramatically whilst
the music gets more tense.
JUMP CUT OUT.
JUMP CUT IN:
EXT. DAY. BAY CLUB
MAIN CHARACTER stands in the middle of the field facing the
camera, which would zoom closer to his face.
JUMP CUT OUT.
JUMP CUT IN:
INT. DAY. BATHROOM
The MAIN CHARACTER would be looking into a mirror at his
bandaged face, the camera slowly zooming in as he begins to take the bandage
off, then suddenly cutting off before he reveals his face.
JUMP CUT OUT.
THE END
Www excellent use of conventions
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